Unbelievable Discovery
Are you fully satisfied with your look? I am not sure how many people can confidently say "yes" to that question. Today, most people are very concerned with beauty as more importance is put on appearance. Accordingly, there has been a great discovery in technology- plastic surgery. It is hard to call it an invention but it certainly is a sensational development in solving the modern people's worries. Although some people oppose plastic surgery, the advantages of it far outweigh the disadvantages because it is one of the most remarkable discoveries ever!
Plastic surgery, also called as cosmetic surgery, is a medical procedure that comes in two forms: aesthetics and reconstructive. The former form is for the sake of beauty and the latter form is for treating malformation of physical appearance. Whichever form it is, both are done in order to make the look better. Other than a simple purpose, there are many merits of doing plastic surgery. Mostly importantly, one can become confident if one gets cosmetic operation. After the operation, people are usually satisfied with their look because the part of the body they did not like about has improved thanks to the technology. Self-satisfaction is important as it makes a person become more confident, which results in a better social relationship. People with a good connection with others can have quality, joyful and meaningful life. Apart from gaining confidence and having better relationship with other people, people who get cosmetic surgery have benefits for getting a job or making more money. That is, when it comes to getting a job in modern days, friendly and hospitable appearance is often used as a good criterion to judge a person. Interviewers are attracted by the people with better appearance. Also, employees with a good look are likely to have better performance. One study shows that people with better look earns 3 to 8 percent more money than those who are considered to have average appearance. Some people might insist that cosmetic operation is costly and has irrevocable side-effects. However, considering the long-term effect, plastic surgery is certainly worth the high cost. Also, side-effects can be avoided if patients find a proper place and a qualified doctor to perform the surgery. Taking care of themselves very well after getting an operation will prevent them from getting any side-effects. Likewise, drawbacks of plastic surgery that opponents argue can be avoided and dealt with.
In short, technology in plastic surgery is one of the best developments. Although some people are against plastic surgery, it offers so many advantages like gaining self-confidence, socializing better, getting higher opportunity to be hired. In general, it allows people's lives much richer and happier. Without this technology, quite a great number of people would be frustrated and depressed with dissatisfaction of their appearance.
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A recent study conducted by the Cosmetics showed that 60 percent of Koreans are not fully satisfied with their look and 70 percent of them actually thought of getting technological help. With the increased number of people concerned with beauty, there has been a great discovery in technology- plastic surgery. It is hard to call it an invention but it certainly is a sensational development in solving the modern people's worries. Although some people oppose plastic surgery, the advantages of it far outweigh the disadvantages because it is one of the most remarkable discoveries ever!
Plastic surgery, also called as cosmetic surgery, is a medical procedure that comes in two forms: aesthetics and reconstructive. The former way is done for the sake of beauty and the latter for treating malformation of physical appearance. Whichever form it is, both are done in order to make the look better. Other than a simple purpose, there are many merits of doing plastic surgery. Mostly importantly, one can become confident if one gets cosmetic operation. After the operation, people are usually satisfied with their look because the part of their body they did not like about has improved thanks to the technology. Self-satisfaction is important as it makes a person become more confident, which results in a better social relationship. People with a good connection with others can have quality, joyful and meaningful life. Apart from gaining confidence and having better relationship with other people, getting cosmetic surgery offers a greater chance for getting a job or making more money. That is, when it comes to getting a job in modern days, friendly and hospitable appearance is often sought. Interviewers are attracted by the people with better appearance. Also, employees with a good look are likely to have better performance. One study shows that people with better look earns 3 to 8 percent more money than those who are considered to have average appearance. Some people might insist that cosmetic operation is costly and has irrevocable side-effects. However, considering the long-term effect, plastic surgery is certainly worth the high cost. Also, side-effects can be avoided if patients find a proper place and a qualified doctor to perform the surgery. Taking care of themselves very well after getting an operation will prevent them from any side-effects. Likewise, drawbacks of plastic surgery that opponents argue can be avoided and dealt with.
In short, technology in plastic surgery is one of the best developments. Although some people are against plastic surgery, it offers so many advantages like gaining self-confidence, socializing better, getting higher opportunity to be hired. In general, it allows people's lives to become far richer and happier. Without the technology, quite a great number of people would be frustrated and depressed with dissatisfaction of their appearance.