My best teacher ever
We meet lots of teachers in our life; some teachers teach us really well and funny, understands us even if we are not good at that subject. And try to make us learn as many as possible. But some are not like that. There are ones that yells to us, put hands to us, and some of them sleep during the class! But what I want to talk about is the good part, especially a teacher who I really liked.
When I was a High-School second grader, I was like a trouble maker. I was not good at studying. And I didn't like it too. So the other teachers almost gave up with me. But my teacher, she wanted to pay attention to me. She was very passionate. I really didn't like her because she always made me study. She gave me extra-homework, and when it was unfinished, I was punished. I hated her with all my heart! My school life was like hell. But during the summer vacation, I received a letter from
From that day I threw away all my hate about my teacher, and tried to become a good student. I studied hard, and my scores got much better. She gave me an experience that if someone cares about someone, that can change the one's life. These days still, I go to my old school to visit her. She is like my friend now and she is really proud of me. She is the best teacher I will ever have.
[Seung Ah Lee]
ReplyDeletein the 3rd line in your body paragraph, what do you mean by "my teacher"? your homeroom teacher? you could have specified more, instead of just saying "my teacher."
and also after saying that she was really passionate, you said you really didn't like her. it sounds kinda abrupt. i mean it would be better if you said u hated at first because ~and so on. Or you could add some kind of transition word, maybe?!
just one more comment...u used the expression 'go bad' but um...as far as i kno..that means food goes out of date and you cannot eat it
so probably u could use another term there~
unique and intersting experience, though! i enjoyed reading it :)
[TAE EUN KWON]
ReplyDeleteI think it's a good thing for you to had such a caring teacher!:D
One thing I though while reading it was that the first paragraph is not that catchy. I was gonig to write just the same as you. My essay intro is also alike yours, so maybe I think we both might have to change for a bit catchy one^^;
[Lee Su A]
ReplyDeleteYou were very lucky to meet that kind of teacher like yours. I was touched by your writing :) Why don't you add more specific information or episodes that happened between you and yout teacher before or after that episode include your writing? It's also good to aad examples of your behaviors to become a good student!
reversion [han soo jung]
ReplyDeleteMy best teacher ever
Teachers can be divided into two parts. Some teachers teach us really well and funny, understands us even if we are not good at that subject. And try to make us learn as many as possible. But some are not like that. There are ones that yells to us, put hands to us, and some of them sleep during the class! But what I want to talk about is the good part, especially a teacher who I really liked.
When I was a High-School second grader, I didn’t like studying, so I almost gave up with it. So the other teachers gave up with me too. I was a lazy trouble maker to them. But my homeroom teacher, she wanted to pay attention to me. She always said, “Don’t give up and do much as you can! You are not an idiot!” I really didn’t like her because she always made me study a lot. She gave me extra-homework, and when it was unfinished, I was punished. I hated her with all my heart! My school life was like hell. Sometimes I pretended as I’m sick and tried take an early leave so I could avoid her although it always didn’t work. But during the summer vacation, I received a letter from Turkey. I did not know anyone at Turkey, so I was surprised. And I opened the letter, it made me surprise more! It was from my teacher! She was on a trip to Europe, and she wrote to me at Turkey. She said that she was sorry about being so harsh, and she wanted to help me because I looked just same as her high-school life. She did not wanted me to ruin my life. That letter, really touched my heart. I was able to feel that she cared for me very much. And it was only sent for me! None of my friends got a letter from her!
From that day I threw away all my hate about my teacher, and tried to become a good student. I studied hard, and my scores got much better. She gave me an experience that if someone cares about someone, that can change the one’s life. These days still, I go to my old school to visit her. She is like my friend now and she is really proud of me. She is the best teacher I will ever have.