Sunday, September 26, 2010

pg.41 essay first draft Soo jung han 200903726

 

Chocolate chip cookies- the best in the world

 

Do you know the character Cookie-monster at a TV program called Sesame street? He is a blue monster that eats all kinds of chocolate chips. I think I am a cookie monster too. I love to eat cookies, I can eat them every day. And sometimes I can't stop my self even though that I know I will get sick. I don't have a sweet tooth, but the most thing that I love is chocolate chip cookie, especially home-made ones.

 

 Chocolate chip cookies are every where, and there are so many kinds of them to try. But to me, my mom's cookies are the best. She started to make them since I was six years old. Her cookies are quite big, as big as my palm. But it is very soft and smells really good. She uses various kinds of toppings. When I was young, she used M&M which were big as some beans and had lots of colors like red, blue, yellow, green and others. As I grew up, instead of M&M; although she uses sometimes, now she uses different flavors of chocolates, like dark chocolates, milk chocolates, white chocolates or strawberry, mint, orange and many other things that are able to use. When it is baked in the oven, the smell of the cookies is all around the house, very strongly and sweet. But my best part is when it comes right out of the oven. They are very hot so its difficult to hold it, they are brown and chocolate chunks at the cover are little bit melted. I take one in my hand, and have a bite. The sweet smell comes into my nose, and at the same time the taste rushes to my tongue. It is very chewy and the chocolate melts down. It is the best time ever!

 

 For my life I had tasted lots of kinds of chocolate chip cookies. They are also delicious and sometimes I love to buy them. But yet I couldn't find a cookie that makes me happy than my mother's. Still to me, my mother's cookies are the best.

2 comments:

  1. [TAE EUN KWON]
    It's funny that you said you're like a cookie monster:D You seem to talk about chocolate chip cookies which is your best food, expecially the one's that your mother makes. I think you explained about it very well because it really makes me to want to try one of those homemade cookies!

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  2. [Seung Ah Lee]
    I felt pleasant while reading your writing. The mood of the writing seems clear as you described your favorite food! But it would have been better if you had more description of the taste of chocolate.

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