Sunday, September 26, 2010

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The Best Health Food: Broiled Eels


    When you are exhausted, you need a health food which supplements your stamina, especially in summer. Because summer is extremely hot and humid in Korea, People are easily fatigued so most Korean eat health foods in summer, such as Sam-gye-tang, Bo-sin-tang, broiled eels. Among those health foods, my favorite food is Broiled eels. Broiled eels are not only good for health but the smell is aromatic and the flavor is fantastic. When I was exhausted, broiled eels made me strong, just like Popeye eating spinach.

    Actually, I didn't like health foods because the flavor of almost health foods was awful for me. However, when I was preparing the college entrance exam, I was exhausted in summer because the weather was very hot and I had to do study all day.  One day, my father said, "You look very tired.  You need a stamina food. Let's go to the broiled eels restaurant."  He brought me to the sea food restaurant and we ate the broiled eels. The broiled eels were roasted on the grill and the smell of roasting eels was aromatic. The smell made me very hungry and I wanted to eat the food as soon as possible. But the eels have to be roasted slowly, so we waited patiently. Eventually, the eels were roasted well and I enjoyed the food.  The flavor of broiled eels got rid of my prejudice that the taste of all the health food is awful.  The more I chewed, the more flavor I got. I devoured all the pieces of meat in a moment. After eating the broiled eel, I immediately felt I was much stronger and could overcome fatigue. Thanks to the broiled eel, I could study hard again.
 

   After that, when I was fatigue and exhausted, I ate broiled eels. An eel is rich in vitamin A,B,C and protein so it is good for skin beauty and relieving fatigue. I highly recommend you to eat broiled eels when you are fatigue and exhausted.

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  1. [Du Ho] Revision

    The Best Health Food: Broiled Eel

    When you are exhausted, you need a health food which supplements your stamina, especially in summer. Because summer is extremely hot and humid in Korea, People are easily fatigued so most Korean eat health foods in summer, such as Sam-gye-tang, Bo-sin-tang, broiled eel. Among those health foods, my favorite food is Broiled eel. Broiled eel is not only good for health but the smell is aromatic and the flavor is fantastic. When I was exhausted, broiled eel made me strong, just like Popeye eating spinach.
    Actually, I did not like health foods because the flavor of almost health foods was awful for me. However, when I was preparing the college entrance exam, I was exhausted in summer because the weather was very hot and I had to do study all day. One day, my father said, “You look very tired. You need a stamina food. Let’s go to the broiled eel restaurant.” He brought me to the sea food restaurant and we ate broiled eel. The broiled eel was roasted with spicy sauce on the grill. Because of the hot sauce, the smell of roasting eel was a little bit hot hat but aromatic. The smell made me very hungry and I wanted to eat the food as soon as possible. Unfortunately, the eel had to be roasted slowly on low heat because the sauce was easy to burn, so we waited patiently. Eventually, the eels were roasted well and I enjoyed the food. The flavor of broiled eels got rid of my prejudice that the taste of all the health food is awful. It seemed to disappeared in my mouth as soon as I put the piece of eel. The flesh of the eel was soft and tender. The more I chewed, the more flavor I got and the spicy sauce was a bit hot but eatable and there was no problem to eat hot foods because I was big fan of the spicy food. I devoured all the pieces of meat in a moment. After eating the broiled eel, I immediately felt I was much stronger and could overcome fatigue. Thanks to the broiled eel, I could study hard again.

    After that, when I was fatigued and exhausted, I ate broiled eel. Tanks to the food I keep my health in every summer. Broiled eel is rich in vitamin A,B,C and protein so it is good for skin beauty and relieving fatigue. I highly recommend you to eat broiled eels when you are fatigued and exhausted.

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