200903141 ELG Sun Hoa Jung
Write a paragraph about something great.
Doing exercises is great for a person. One of my best friends and I started practicing Yoga from last Monday, September 6th. I decided to do Yoga only for losing weight. I did it just for four days, but I felt something changed in my body and my mind. Actually I had suffered from sleeplessness during the whole summer vacation, so my body, especially my complexion was really bad and I was always tired. And I couldn't feel relieved. Sometimes I even didn't know what I was thinking about. However, after doing Yoga for a few days, I can have a good night. Of course my skin's condition is better now, and I feel relaxed, so I can concentrate more on my everyday school life. Actually I am completely absorbed in doing exercises these days. I occasionally play Badminton and Table Tennis as well. I thought that I would be more tired after working up a sweat. But it's not true. Working out hard is really helping me be lively to everything.
[Seung Ah]
ReplyDeleteThat's nice~! though we know exercising is good for health, few of us actually exercise. Good that you are enjoying it now.
To comment on your writing...I just wonder if it is necessary to capitalize the initial letter of sports names.
[Lee Su A]
ReplyDeleteI took some of Yoga courses when I was in high school, so I agree with your opinion about the effectiveness of doing Yoga. I would also like to mention about the initial letter of sports names in your writing!
[Sun Hoa Jung 200903141]
ReplyDeleteActually I want to emphasize the sports names that I'm working out, so I capitalized the initial letter of them.