The greastest baseball player, Lee Jong Beom Lee Jong Beom is the greatest baseball player in Korean baseball league. He is playing in a prestigious baseball team, Kia Tigers which won the Korean series the most. He was the outstanding player when he was a rookie. He led his team to win the Korean series and he was the MVP of the series in his debut season. Since then, he has been the best player in Korean base ball league. His position is the short step and first hitter of his team. He has a lot league records such as the stolen base and hits and batter average. He stole the 84 bases and hit 196 hits a year, and his personal batting average record was .396. Although he was a small player, he hit many homeruns. He always hit homeruns more than 20 in most seasons in his glory days and his best homerun record was 30 a year. Because of his outstanding record, He transferred to Japanese baseball team, Junich Dragons in 1998 and his performance was great in
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ReplyDeleteIn the first sentence, I think it's better to write like "Lee Jong Beom is one of the greatest baseball players in Korean baseball league." Because there are also many great players in Korean baseball league. And just writing superlative would feel kind of tendentious.